Science Fair Presentation - First Draft
I'm glad I recorded my presentation on video before the Science Fair because:
Science Fair Presentation - Improved Version
By the end of the Science Fair, my presentation was much better because:
Overall, I think that the Science Fair was a valuable experience because...
I definitely made some mistakes along the way, but I learned from them. Here are some examples...
If I were give the chance to do anything differently, I would do...
I can't remember any mistakes but I know I made a few.
Nothing. I like my experiment the way I did it.