I was in Colorado . I can't make it up.
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I thought it was really. I wasn't the greatest because I not the most creative but drew was really good.
We both had cramp after eating lunch
-We were panting. -My heart was beating really fast. - I got a little chill. -We both got a little red faced. -I broke out a little sweat. - My muscles go a little sore after a while.
There is flaring out from the middle to the outside. There is a brown ring around a hole and in that hole there is things that look like lily pedals and those pedals are harder than the outside. The bottom of the apple has kind of flaps that are up and under the flaps are little things ht look like thorns but aren't sharp. On the right side of the inside of the apple on the top and bottom are brown spots, they feel like sponges. And when you poke at them juice fill it up. In that hole in the center has a little white fuzzy coating. The stem also had a coating in brownish fuzzy coating. The skin of the apple is red and a little yellow. Over that is tiny tiny speckles of white. There are little cut and bruises on the skin too. Under the brownish yellowish whitish outside is a greener cleaner yellow. When you screaped it you could hear a juicy lottery card. It also smelled so good I really wanted to eat it.
Reflection:
1. What are the rules of a personal narrative? You need to focus on a single moment. You need an important subject, Strong verbs/adverbs and Have Dialogue.
2. What skill in writing do you feel you are very good at and can help others? I think I am good at a strong lead. I always use dialogue at the start and I believe that keeps the reader into the story. 3. What skill in writing do you feel that you should improve in? I think that I could improve on showing more and focusing more because some time I have not compact stories and I tell a lot.
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