There once was a devils cave in the bottom of the dragons cave. The devil would keep a person in the golden house and they would eventually die of dehydration. The devil would also bring people down put them in front of a light and they went blind. But one day there was a dragon that came down trying to defeat the devil he was killed and thrown in the pit of fire. The dragon inspired people and they made a group to defeat the devil they came down on ropes and defeated him but the dragon rose from the dead....
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Mr Vaughan (team 100WC)
2/21/2014 06:22:26 pm
What an other-worldly entry to the 100WC! I like the way you have left it on a bit of cliffhanger, leaving me wondering what's going to happen next.
Sebastian
2/24/2014 07:55:47 am
Wow great story you really grabbed me right at the begining of your story and made me want to read more.My class is soposed to say somthing that you could have done better but I cant think of anything.Amazing story I can't wait to find out what happen's
Dalton
2/24/2014 08:00:55 am
Wow!! I felt like i was in the story. Excellent job.My class is suppose to give good advice but i cant think about what to write.
Brady
2/24/2014 08:05:25 am
Wow!! that story really got me i like it keep up the good work. Leave a Reply. |
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