In a personal narrative you need to focus on a moment. This one we focussed on a specific setting. WEX explained the setting as the circumstance,place,and time. You can focus on a single  moment. A unique perspective. An important object and stuff like that.You need to expand the big moment. You would need to indent and have really good dialogue. You need varied sentence lengths. You need to show not tell. You need some transitions and conjunctions. I think I am good at capitals and periods. I think I need to improve on indenting. I could help point out the capitals and periods. 

I think there are like having reports on people our sort of related to each other. They are both pretty fun learning,but the teachers need to do something to make it fun. I learned that he was the president of the Second Continental Congress. I didn't know this and I have always wondered who the president was. I learned of course it was him. I think we could of made a thinglink with someone else in science. I think science would go perfectly with thinglink.It would work with the ballon one. I would of put it on a ballon and said watch this video.It would teach some people about that lesson.