I believe that all narratives must have to really show the emotions that the character was having but with a lot of depth to every detail.I believe that every narrative also has to have an intriguing introduction/begining to pull in the reader into the story so they don't get board and want stop stop reading.
I feel like I am good at descriptionbut in this narritive I don't think I showed it much
I believe I need to show emotion even though I think that's what helps make a good story.
When I met Angus McClain he was a nice guy but I already knew that from when I met him the day before. He told us cool facts even though I knew some of the facts but I still learned a lot like that they carried knives that went around their necks.I thought it was interesting but I wish I had a seat because I knew he had a lot to say and it would take him a long time to tell all of his cool facts and I was getting tired of sitting.I think this was a valuable experience because it was a fun way to learn facts I thought were actually really interesting.
When I met Angus he was walking down a street by himself when I called his name and started to talk he was very talkative. He told me stories about the militia and the war like about encounters with British soldiers and native Americans. I think he is interesting because I enjoy facts about the military and wars. I don't think that he is very funny but he is smart,He told me facts about the Continental army and the militia. He asked about me like do I have any family that is or was in the military like him. I told him yes and I asked if he had any pets and he answered yes because he has a hunting dog.He had to leave to go back to the barracks.
Our answers were okay but a few were bad.
Our preparation was terrible because we did not really plan out the answers well at all.
I think our behavior was fine but I were a little nervous because of our bad preparation.
Our final product was not so good because we didn't have answers right away but we still found answers for the questions even though I think I kind of repeated myself.
It shows we know what a Loyalist is because I state that Patriots are savages showing that I don't agree with their beliefs in my script.
The script shows we know what a Patriot is because he says that the men in the Boston Tea party did the right thing.
Are script shows that we understand are two events that lead up to the revolution because Michael said "But taxing paper that's just crazy!"Referring to the Stamp Act. Also I say "Did you hear about those savages breaking tea into the Boston harbor?" Referring to the Boston Tea party.
1. I chose to research about the revolutionary war.
2.I chose to research about the revolution because I think that it is an interesting story because Britain, one of the strongest armies in the world lost a war to a bunch of angry farmers.
3. It is important today because if we didn't have it or lost then we would be part of Britain and some of history could have changed like the Civil War world war2 and no President would ever be famous or help the country.
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