Matthew
5/21/2012 12:03:26 pm
Your story is good, it's kind of funny. But the 'happily ever after' is bad.:-(
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Kristin
5/21/2012 01:25:14 pm
I think this story was very interesting. I liked how you used diologue and narration. It was also very funny. You did really good!
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Eddie
6/4/2012 09:17:31 am
I really liked the part were all the animals escaped.
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Sean
6/5/2012 02:35:44 am
Happily ever after is a terrible ending!!
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