Please read and comment on my story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XQyhAbgSnty0hK6xIBWmhzhr4SQbMuMT_7JD4ILyxmM/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XQyhAbgSnty0hK6xIBWmhzhr4SQbMuMT_7JD4ILyxmM/edit?usp=sharing
I'd really appreciate compliments and suggestions that deal with the following standards that I'm trying to master:
- Using showing details to help my reader visualize important scenes in my story.
- Using dialogue to bring a scene alive for my reader.
- Organizing my writing chronologically so my reader moves throughout my story without being confused.
- Focusing on a single moment in time.
- Capitalization.
- Punctuation.
- Spelling.