Science Fair-First Draft
I'm glad I recorded my presentation on video before the Science Fair because:
Then I could see how much I improved after the science fair and I could think where i need to improve after the first draft.
Science Fair Final Draft
By the end of the Science Fair, my presentation was much better because:
I improved in so many ways and I made it shorter too I also told them why Chocolate syrup got hottest and I told them why I thought water would get the hottest.
Overall, I think that the Science Fair was a valuable experience because...
I definitely made some mistakes along the way, but I learned from them. Here are some examples...
If I were give the chance to do anything differently, I would...
1. I thought it was valuable because I learned all about liquids and I even learned stuff that I didn't even know like viscosity.
2. I made one mistake that I learned from like I didn't say the reasons why it did what it did. When I was saying my presentation I learned things.
3.If I got to do one thong differently I would change how I spoke and I would speak more energetically.