| This is a story about a kid vursing his best friend in baseball. Will he win? |
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Charlie
5/18/2012 02:41:50 am
Nice story Matthew I loved at the end how he hit the guys catchers mit instead of the ball. And how at the end Paul confessed that he cheated.
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Mallory
5/18/2012 02:50:38 am
I love how you changed your voice like "on the edge of your seat" you did great!!!!!
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Abby
5/18/2012 02:51:03 am
I like how you used voice inflection throught out your story.
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Aidan
5/18/2012 03:49:54 am
I liked it it a lot and his little sister.
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nakool
5/18/2012 10:35:57 am
This story was a complete blast of one single thing: HA HA HA HO HA HA...A...A...A...A...HOT DOG...a. 4.5 stars
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Eddie
6/4/2012 09:32:21 am
I like how when he barfed his sister started laughing and also kabiggled
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SEAN
6/5/2012 02:38:58 am
I like your good description.
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