This story is about a girl named Keira who has some trouble getting what she wants.
Natalie
5/18/2012 03:47:40 am
I love your awesome showing details you used! I could clearly paint a picture in my head of what was going on in the story. I enjoyed the relationship of all the kids because it reminds me of my family. (Natalie)
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rhett
5/18/2012 05:33:23 am
I really saw it in my head and it was not talking really fast unlike the others so i could see it better.
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Kristin
5/21/2012 01:22:25 pm
You really painted a picture in my head with your great showing details in your story. I really like how the story was realistic, but still very interesting. You did a wonderful job!
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