I really like the different and funny aspects of this story. I have to say, Alice is a very unique character. I liked your word choice, and how the story flowed. I also like the balance between diologue and narration. Wonderful job!
I liked how your story was really funny and made people laugh. You story was really good!
I liked the part about an artistic, ingenious, work of art a lot.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.