Alice has decided to catch wild animals. That idea started all from making her bed.
Kristin
5/21/2012 01:28:47 pm
I really like the different and funny aspects of this story. I have to say, Alice is a very unique character. I liked your word choice, and how the story flowed. I also like the balance between diologue and narration. Wonderful job!
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Kylie
6/4/2012 01:38:54 pm
I liked how your story was really funny and made people laugh. You story was really good!
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Caroline
6/5/2012 12:16:09 am
I liked the part about an artistic, ingenious, work of art a lot.
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