Lara
5/18/2012 02:26:39 am
I like all the action and the adventure that Axel goes through but I got a little tired of all the excitment. You need a different expression than "On the edge of your seat" voice. Other than that I liked it.
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Mallory
5/18/2012 02:46:43 am
I love how you change the sound of your voice like high and that low it is very Good!
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Lucia
5/20/2012 08:53:58 am
I really liked how this was all in a different setting--what I am pretty sure is a farm. I like the change and how here rising action is on a farm and has a lot to do with goats. I really wanted to know what happened next throughout the story.
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Eva
6/5/2012 02:55:16 am
I love the story and the expressions.
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