There is a light. It is the only light in a world of dark. I am the light keeper. I keep the light and the light is very hard to keep when it is the only light in a world of dark hate and fighting and madness. I am the one who can save the people and rid this land of the dark forever. I have had to do some things that no one else has ever had to do. I have worked so hard for this .But this is the moment where dark becomes light and it feels amazing.
17 Comments
Mary @ Team 100 WC
2/21/2014 05:38:08 am
Hi Keegan,
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2/21/2014 02:42:47 pm
This is a very strong response to the prompt Keegan. Well done! I think you have allowed your reader to interpret 'the light ' and 'dark' in any way that relates to them - which could be on so many different levels. Your 100WC is mature and well crafted. I will nominate it for the showcase this week.
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 11:35:37 am
Thank you for looking at my story and liking it! It was amazingly cool when my teacher told me that I was in the showcase.
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Mrs Skinner (Team100) Bristol, UK
2/24/2014 07:28:52 pm
This post has been put forward for the showcase but it has taken me a while to trawl the data base to find school/ location details. Could they please be put on the link?
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2/25/2014 01:47:34 am
Hi Mrs. Skinner -
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:04:08 pm
Sorry for not putting that in!
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2/25/2014 04:23:57 am
Wooo Hooo! First week of the challenge!
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2/25/2014 04:40:02 am
Thanks for the nudge, Gina, to have us do the 100 Word Challenge this week! I'm so proud of my students & especially Keegan for his "Showcased Piece!" Way to go Keegan!!!
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:06:36 pm
Thank you! I hope that my teacher, Mr.Solarz, Lets us do this again.
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Hannah
2/25/2014 07:31:13 am
Love your writing it is very detailed.
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:07:56 pm
Thank you for that! This activity was very cool and fun to do.
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3/1/2014 06:57:39 pm
Wow! I love this writing. It is really original and you have effectively repeated certain words (this is really hard to do!)
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:09:57 pm
Thats so cool! I really hope your class likes it as much as you do!
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Connor
3/19/2014 06:19:59 am
I really like it Keegan. It's very descriptive, and it is really creative, too.
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:18:53 pm
Thanks Connor! I read yours and I was into it the whole time!
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Jack S
3/19/2014 06:21:49 am
This is AWESOME Keegster! This is really descriptive... I LOVE IT!
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Keegan D.
3/19/2014 12:22:59 pm
Thanks Jackylope, I read yours and it was very nice and even better in the beginning.
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