Nice story Matthew I loved at the end how he hit the guys catchers mit instead of the ball. And how at the end Paul confessed that he cheated.
I love how you changed your voice like "on the edge of your seat" you did great!!!!!
I like how you used voice inflection throught out your story.
I liked it it a lot and his little sister.
This story was a complete blast of one single thing: HA HA HA HO HA HA...A...A...A...A...HOT DOG...a. 4.5 stars
I like how when he barfed his sister started laughing and also kabiggled
I like your good description.
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