Joanna
5/18/2012 02:29:14 am
Good but slow ;o
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Mallory
5/18/2012 02:31:49 am
Journy reminds me of my brother he is a brat just like Journy and I loved all of the dialog in your story and I like how you swiched your voices.
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Josie
5/18/2012 02:32:19 am
I like how you made Journey original with all of her other brothers and sisters be twins. I think that the best part was when she wiped the toilet.
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Joanna
5/18/2012 02:32:26 am
MEAN!!!!!!!
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Devon
5/18/2012 05:35:23 am
i like how she has a LOT of siblings
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Caroline
5/19/2012 06:20:04 am
I really liked your story!! I loved when they went to target! I reminded me of my brother!
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Eva
6/5/2012 02:58:38 am
I love all of the different characters it was very creative.
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