I Love all the humor in your story I couldn't even listen too it without laughing! I loved it!
I love your story and the barby doll part hallarious. The humor was great.
a great comedy with hobos, explosions and....Buffalo chips???
Yours is halarious if u make a sequal i will totally read it.
I liked your story a lot and the comady in it and the people that you made up were halures!
Quite "interesting" and exciting.4 stars
I LOVED your story! I really liked that you put my character in the story! I think it was so FUNNY!!!!!!!
It was interesting and the beggining is awesome! So funny
It was super funny!!! I love how Hobo Joe saved Flownisha. :-) But it was a little long.
It was hilarious.My favorite character was hobo joe. I was longer than I expected.
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