This a story about a girl that is super excited for camp but hits some bumps in the road along the way.
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Lucia
5/20/2012 01:06:00 am
Natalie,
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Maggie
5/20/2012 10:21:02 am
I love the way you connected real events in a young childs life, but made it very funny and definalty unique.
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Kristin
5/21/2012 01:19:20 pm
I really love how you described the way your character feels throughout the story. You also did a great job of making the story realistic and believable. It was a very interesting story. Great job!
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Abby
6/5/2012 01:34:46 am
i love all of the showing deatials. your story was great i loved it.
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