I think that this was my best story that I wrote ever because I think in this story I used a lot of descriptive words.I also think that this was a fun thing to do because I got to use garage band and I also think that this was one of the most fun W.E.X lesson ever.I learned that I can make my story better by revising the story. When I revised I put things in or took things out to make the story better to have it make more sense. And when I read the story out loud it helped me edit the story.
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