When I was about 7, I went to Chulavista. I sat into the raft getting my bottom a little wet.I looked around only to see a vast ,in size, room filled with water slides and raft stations. All of a sudden, we dropped into the tube and everything went very black. I couldn't even see my hand. As I zoomed through the tube the wafting smell of chlorine blasting in my face. I screamed a scream of pure excitement, and the sounds echoed through the walls. In the distance I could hear a little bit of disco music that continually got louder until....... I fell into a swirler with a disco theme on it. It had a disco ball and everything. A big splash flew in my face as I was opening my mouth for another holler. The taste was absolutely horrible. As if no time had elapsed I shot out of the tube as fast as a bullet, into a small landing filled with water. I whooped and hollered so loud that everybody starting staring.
Ian O.
4/2/2013 08:13:46 am
This great! Awesome! Your description is Grrrrreat!
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Erin
4/4/2013 08:16:47 am
That sounds like a lot of fun! I wish I could there.
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Matt G.
4/4/2013 12:05:45 pm
Wow, that sounds exciting!!! Similar to the tube slide I went in at great America last year.
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